Nowadays, the popularity of foreign film-making is on the increase among the film industry rather than local one. This essay will present the reasons why people prefer watching foreign films and why government should prioritize local industries more.
It is understandable that foreign films has drawn the worldwide attention of people. Above all, films produced internationally have huge budgets and special things such as dynamic action, magnificent effects, shooting scenes and spectacular places. As an illustration, one of the Hollywood Blockbusters, Mission Impossible stared by Tom Cruise, has been a great success as this film has many renowned actors or actresses and directors. Accordingly, it makes people to be easily fascinated to prefer wating foreign films more.
However, my brief is that governments should support domestic film industries financially. First of all, this investment would be good opportunities for local actors and actresses are talanted, but not able to prove their abilities globally. Next, a successful local film supported by governments could acttract a large number of tourists all over the world, informing their country abroad. To take an example of Korean moive, Train to Busan, was a great deal of hit last year, especially in the Southest countreis. As a result, it will help a country to make a lot of profits from the popularity.
In conclusion, while people of today do not prefer to watch local films, the financial support of governments could help to raise the quality of local films with a lot of benefits from the tourism at the same time.
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