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Academic task1 첨삭 부탁 드립니다..

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■ Direction You have 20 minutes to plan and write your response. You response will be judge on the basis of The quality of writing and on how well your response presents the points in the lecture and the relationship to the reading passage. Typically, an effective response will be 150 to 225 words.
■ Question Summarize the points made in the lecture you just heard, explaining how they cast doubt on the points made in the reading


▶ Topic :


 : The graph shows the consumption of fast food in Canada between 1990 and 2010.
: The graph shows the consumption of fast food in Canada between 1990 and 2010.




▶ Your Answer :

The given line graph gives information about fast food consumption in Canada throughout the research period from 1990 to 2010. There are five different kinds of fast foods surveyed, including pizza, hamburger, fried chicken, hot dog and French fries.


As clearly seen from the graph, there were fluctuations of the amount of fast food eaten by Canadians. It is interesting to see the decline of its popularity in consumption of fried chicken. Fried chicken was the most eaten fast food in 1990 with 400 grams, but at the end of research period in 2010, it is the least popular fast food.


The amount of pizza consumption increased dramatically after hitting the lowest point at 70 grams in 1995. In 2010, a Canadian ate 500 grams of pizza, and this figure was the top of the list, followed by French fries and hamburger. Consumption of hot dog remained steady around 200~250 grams over the given period.


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