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task 1 첨삭부탁드립니다 !! 감사합니다!!

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  • 2017.01.07
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■ Direction You have 20 minutes to plan and write your response. You response will be judge on the basis of The quality of writing and on how well your response presents the points in the lecture and the relationship to the reading passage. Typically, an effective response will be 150 to 225 words.
■ Question Summarize the points made in the lecture you just heard, explaining how they cast doubt on the points made in the reading


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The first chart illustrates how many people visit to Ashdown Museum during the year before and after it was redecorated. The two pie charts show how the respondents were happy with the museum refurbished over the research period.

As clearly seen from the table, the total number of visitors to the museum increased considerably from 74,000 during the year before refurbishment to 92,000 during the year after refurbishment. Also, respondents' satisfaction rose significantly after refurbishment. The figures for very satisfied and satisfied increased by 20% and 10%, respectively.

On the other hand, visitor dissatisfaction declined after Ashdown museum was remodeled. 40% of the respondents were dissatisfied with the museum before refurbishment, but the number of people who were dissatisfied with it decreased dramatically from 40% to 15%. In addition, the figure for visitors who were very dissatisfied fell slightly by 5%, with the same percentage of respondents who diid not respond at 5%.

Overall, while the number of respondetns who were happy with the museum showed overall increases, that of respondents who were unhappy with the museum showed overall decreases throughout the entire research period.

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10611 [Task2] 첨삭 부탁드립니다. pana 43 2017.01.09
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10608 답글 [Task1] RE:첨삭 부탁드립니다. 사진 [1] Soo 23 2017.01.13
10607 [Task2] TASk2 첨삭 부탁드립니다 감사합니다~! cindy7767 34 2017.01.09
10606 답글 [Task2] RE:TASk2 첨삭 부탁드립니다 감사합니다~! Soo 13 2017.01.13
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10601 [첨삭] 첨삭부탁드립니다 TASK@2 40 2017.01.07
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10599 [Task2] TASk2 첨삭 부탁드립니다 감사합니다~! cindy7767 49 2017.01.07
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