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TASk2 첨삭 부탁드립니다 감사합니다~!

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  • 2017.01.07
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■ Direction You have 20 minutes to plan and write your response. You response will be judge on the basis of The quality of writing and on how well your response presents the points in the lecture and the relationship to the reading passage. Typically, an effective response will be 150 to 225 words.
■ Question Summarize the points made in the lecture you just heard, explaining how they cast doubt on the points made in the reading

▶ Topic :Some people believe that technology has brought significant benefits, whereas others think that it has brought negative consequences.

discuss both views and your personal opinion.

▶ Your Answer :

People have different opinions on technology innovation these days. Some assert that people can get lots of benefit from technology, while others maintain that the development of technology can have a negative effect on our society. Despite the drawbacks of technology, I strongly believe that it it beneficial to all every part of our lives. Both view will be discussed below as well as my personal opinion regarding this issue.

When it comes to negative impact caused by technology, it pollutes the environment in the worlld. According to the study conducted on main causes for air pollution, experts said that the bad fuel from many vehicles worsen air quality.

However, in my opinion, the advantaes of technology can outweigh the disadvantages of technology since people have developed efficient electronical vehicles due to technology, and this type of cars do not emit harm gases.

In addition, technology innovation has brought a variety of benefits to people. They can fly across the world within the short time by developing the modern aircrafts. For exmaple, I visited the Philippines a few years age by flight. It took about four hours from South Korea to the Philippines. If it were not for aircrafts, it would be taken much longer time. With the invention of the aircrafts, people cna live more practical and convenient lives. In this regard, technology is really helpful for ordinary people's lifestyles.

In conclusion, some people think that there are harmful consequences cuased by technology. However, I agree with the fact that technology is beneficial to our life since it helps people to improve the quality of their lives and compensate the defect created from technology.

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