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첨삭부탁드려요.감사합니다.

영어보이 | 조회 15 | 추천 0
  • 2017.01.08
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■ Direction You have 20 minutes to plan and write your response. You response will be judge on the basis of The quality of writing and on how well your response presents the points in the lecture and the relationship to the reading passage. Typically, an effective response will be 150 to 225 words.
■ Question Summarize the points made in the lecture you just heard, explaining how they cast doubt on the points made in the reading


▶ Topic :

Many old buildings protected by law are part of a nation's history. Some people think they should be knocked down and replaced by new ones. To what extent do you agree or disagree?


▶ Your Answer :

It is widely accepted that historical objects are valuable parts of our society nowadays. Some people argue that those are in need of destruction and the objects are superseded by new construction. I mostly do not agree with the statement. There are many reasons why they should be kept by law.

 

Historical remains have the value just because of being present today. In detail, we have rarely seen a great deal of those which remain until now. In fact, it is fortunate for people to see them and those make people feel a great sense of trace from our ancestors. Moreover, those are worth investigating for the field of archeology, resulting in our generation knowing more about our past and furthermore, ways of life. Secondly, it is very helpful for children to understand the history since they have been there. For those reasons, it goes without saying that ancient monuments need protecting by law.

 

However, there is a demerit with them, which can be seen as obstacles when it comes to social evolution. For example, there are ancient remains in a small city which is in need of development for better life of residents. The government is likely to hesitate to make a decision whether it is good for doing it or not. As a result of this, a city cannot be reconstruted just because they have existed.

 

In conclusion, I personally agree with the opinion that they need to be kept by law since those provide educational knowledge for the young and it has historical value of being present as well.

 

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10613 [Task2] Task 2 첨삭 부탁드립니다! CINDYYY 29 2017.01.10
10612 답글 [Task2] RE:Task 2 첨삭 부탁드립니다! meer 17 2017.01.13
10611 [Task2] 첨삭 부탁드립니다. pana 43 2017.01.09
10610 답글 [Task2] RE:첨삭 부탁드립니다. meer 14 2017.01.14
10609 [Task1] 첨삭 부탁드립니다. 사진 pana 47 2017.01.09
10608 답글 [Task1] RE:첨삭 부탁드립니다. 사진 [1] Soo 23 2017.01.13
10607 [Task2] TASk2 첨삭 부탁드립니다 감사합니다~! cindy7767 34 2017.01.09
10606 답글 [Task2] RE:TASk2 첨삭 부탁드립니다 감사합니다~! Soo 13 2017.01.13
10605 [첨삭] 첨삭부탁드립니다.감사합니다. 영어보이 12 2017.01.08
10604 답글 [첨삭] RE:첨삭부탁드립니다.감사합니다. Soo 24 2017.01.13
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10602 답글 [첨삭] RE:첨삭부탁드려요.감사합니다. Soo 18 2017.01.13
10601 [첨삭] 첨삭부탁드립니다 TASK@2 40 2017.01.07
10600 답글 [첨삭] RE:첨삭부탁드립니다 Soo 25 2017.01.13
10599 [Task2] TASk2 첨삭 부탁드립니다 감사합니다~! cindy7767 49 2017.01.07
10598 답글 [Task2] RE:TASk2 첨삭 부탁드립니다 감사합니다~! Soo 21 2017.01.13
10597 [Task1] task 1 첨삭부탁드립니다 !! 감사합니다!! cindy7767 50 2017.01.07
10596 답글 [Task1] RE:task 1 첨삭부탁드립니다 !! 감사합니다!! meer 20 2017.01.12
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