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첨삭 부탁드립니다.

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  • 2017.01.09
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■ Direction You have 20 minutes to plan and write your response. You response will be judge on the basis of The quality of writing and on how well your response presents the points in the lecture and the relationship to the reading passage. Typically, an effective response will be 150 to 225 words.
■ Question Summarize the points made in the lecture you just heard, explaining how they cast doubt on the points made in the reading

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The pie chart shows the percentage of water used for various purposes in six areas of the world. The percentage of water used for agricultural purpose is the biggest in most of the areas except for North America and Europe. It accounts for more than 70 percent in South America, Africa, central Asia, and South East Asia. Industrial use has the biggest share in both North American and Europe accounting for 48 percent and 53 percent respectively. However, water used for industrial purpose has the smallest share in South America, Africa, and Central Asia with the percentage of no more than 10 percent each. Domestic use accounts for the smallest amount in South East Asia with 7 percent. On the other hand, Domestic use has the second greatest share in the rest of five areas. In conclusion, it can be seen that people in South America, Africa, Central Asia, South east Asia use water for agriculture the most while North America and Europe use water for industry the most.
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10626 답글 [Task1] RE:*첨삭부탁드려요 사진 meer 21 2017.01.14
10625 [Task2] 에세이 첨삭 부탁드립니다 defkorn 31 2017.01.12
10624 답글 [Task2] RE:에세이 첨삭 부탁드립니다 meer 17 2017.01.14
10623 [Task2] 에세이 첨삭 부탁드립니다. defkorn 10 2017.01.12
10622 답글 [Task2] RE:에세이 첨삭 부탁드립니다. meer 15 2017.01.14
10621 [Task1] 첨삭부탁드립니다 :) 사진 29 2017.01.11
10620 답글 [Task1] RE:첨삭부탁드립니다 :) 사진 meer 23 2017.01.13
10619 [Task2] Task 2 첨삭 부탁드립니다! 33 2017.01.11
10618 답글 [Task2] RE:Task 2 첨삭 부탁드립니다! meer 23 2017.01.13
10617 [Task2] TASk2 첨삭 부탁드립니다 감사합니다~! cindy7767 30 2017.01.11
10616 답글 [Task2] RE:TASk2 첨삭 부탁드립니다 감사합니다~! meer 18 2017.01.13
10615 [Task2] Task1 첨삭 부탁드립니다!! 항상 감사합니다! cindy7767 34 2017.01.11
10614 답글 [Task2] RE:Task1 첨삭 부탁드립니다!! 항상 감사합니다! meer 9 2017.01.13
10613 [Task2] Task 2 첨삭 부탁드립니다! CINDYYY 25 2017.01.10
10612 답글 [Task2] RE:Task 2 첨삭 부탁드립니다! meer 14 2017.01.13
10611 [Task2] 첨삭 부탁드립니다. pana 40 2017.01.09
10610 답글 [Task2] RE:첨삭 부탁드립니다. meer 12 2017.01.14
>> [Task1] 첨삭 부탁드립니다. 사진 pana 46 2017.01.09
10608 답글 [Task1] RE:첨삭 부탁드립니다. 사진 [1] Soo 21 2017.01.13
10607 [Task2] TASk2 첨삭 부탁드립니다 감사합니다~! cindy7767 30 2017.01.09