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첨삭 부탁드립니다.

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  • 2017.01.09
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■ Direction You have 20 minutes to plan and write your response. You response will be judge on the basis of The quality of writing and on how well your response presents the points in the lecture and the relationship to the reading passage. Typically, an effective response will be 150 to 225 words.
■ Question Summarize the points made in the lecture you just heard, explaining how they cast doubt on the points made in the reading


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The pie chart shows the percentage of water used for various purposes in six areas of the world. The percentage of water used for agricultural purpose is the biggest in most of the areas except for North America and Europe. It accounts for more than 70 percent in South America, Africa, central Asia, and South East Asia. Industrial use has the biggest share in both North American and Europe accounting for 48 percent and 53 percent respectively. However, water used for industrial purpose has the smallest share in South America, Africa, and Central Asia with the percentage of no more than 10 percent each. Domestic use accounts for the smallest amount in South East Asia with 7 percent. On the other hand, Domestic use has the second greatest share in the rest of five areas. In conclusion, it can be seen that people in South America, Africa, Central Asia, South east Asia use water for agriculture the most while North America and Europe use water for industry the most.
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