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첨삭 부탁드립니다.

pana | 조회 40 | 추천 0
  • 2017.01.09
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■ Direction You have 20 minutes to plan and write your response. You response will be judge on the basis of The quality of writing and on how well your response presents the points in the lecture and the relationship to the reading passage. Typically, an effective response will be 150 to 225 words.
■ Question Summarize the points made in the lecture you just heard, explaining how they cast doubt on the points made in the reading


▶ Topic :

Governments should spend money on railways rather than roads.

To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?


▶ Your Answer :

There are many people using trains than cars these days and they argue that governments should spend money on railways rather than roads. Even though developing roads is also essential in that many car drivers suffer from traffic jam, I agree more on spending money on railways rather than roads for several reasons.

           Firstly, Trains can be used by wider range of people while only those who hold driver's license or own a car can drive a car. For example, people aged under 20 cannot drive in many countries. Therefore, when they want to travel to other side of their country or visit their relatives in different region without someone else's help, train is the fastest and easiest way for them. And this is from my personal experience. When I was in high school, I lived in different region where 300 kilometers away from my family. Without taking a train I would not have been able to visit my family every weekend easily.

           Another reason is that it can reduce traffic jam. If governments spend money on railways and develop it, more people will take a train rather than driving a car. Driving a car takes a lot of car such as paying for gas, insurance, yearly check up, and traffic jam must be the most irritating problem of all. If railways are developed more, those who used to drive can take a train and do not have to suffer from these problems anymore. Furthermore, it is also better for those who still want to drive since there would be less cars on the road, which will lead to less traffic jam.

           I understand that spending money roads can be necessary for drivers but if governments spend money on railways, it can satisfy both train users and car drivers. Therefore, I agree that governments should spend money on railways rather than roads. 

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10621 [Task1] 첨삭부탁드립니다 :) 사진 29 2017.01.11
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10618 답글 [Task2] RE:Task 2 첨삭 부탁드립니다! meer 23 2017.01.13
10617 [Task2] TASk2 첨삭 부탁드립니다 감사합니다~! cindy7767 30 2017.01.11
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10613 [Task2] Task 2 첨삭 부탁드립니다! CINDYYY 25 2017.01.10
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10609 [Task1] 첨삭 부탁드립니다. 사진 pana 46 2017.01.09
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