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TASk2 첨삭 부탁드립니다 감사합니다~!

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  • 2017.01.11
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■ Direction You have 20 minutes to plan and write your response. You response will be judge on the basis of The quality of writing and on how well your response presents the points in the lecture and the relationship to the reading passage. Typically, an effective response will be 150 to 225 words.
■ Question Summarize the points made in the lecture you just heard, explaining how they cast doubt on the points made in the reading


▶ Topic :International travel allows the experience of diverse culture but also leads to development of negative stereotype and other negative experiences.

problem and solution


▶ Your Answer :

People have different opinions on whether international travel can give them negative stereotypes of effects. Some assert that international travel has the only advantages. However, I strongly believe that this has a negative effect on people as well as a positive effect. This essay will highlight the problems associated with abroad trip and present potential solutions.

First of all, although people can learn a variety of cultures by going to travel abroad, they can also be encauraged to develop their experiences about foreign countries. When people visit to the other countries without any information about those countries, they might have negative experiences. For example, while some want to travel the country that is crowded and fancy, others want to travel the country that is really quiet and calm. Most people enjoy travelling in New York city, but one who likes an atmosphere of calm cannot be satisfied with the New York trip.

Second, travellers have to search the information about where they will visit in order to prevent themselves from experiencing negative aspects. From my personal experience, I visited to Calgary during the Christmas a few years ago.

I expected that I could spend time with the local and that the restaurants and pubs there were crowded. However, on Christmas day, there were no stores and restaurants that are open. If I knew about the culture which the local always spend their Christmas with their family, I was not going to travel to Calgary on Christmas. This trip gave me unfavorable experience. Thus, learning about the country before you go can be a solution for having negative experience.

In conclusion, while international travel provides people with the chance to expeerience of diverse culture, it leads to have negative experiences.

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